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写作句型(三)

《essay commenting on curiosity》提取出的功能句

写作句型(三)

注:标红的是可替换的词组

源自作文题目:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on Albert Einstein’s remark “I have no special talents, but I am only passionately curious.” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

功能句1

例:“I have no special talents, but I am only passionately curious.” This is a simple but enlightening remark on curiosity by Albert Einstein.

译:“我没有什么特别的才能,不过我只有强烈的好奇心。”这是阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦关于好奇心的一句简单却发人深省的话。

  • simple / brief
  • enlightening / thought / provoking
  • remark / saying / drawing / chart / phenomenon

功能句2

例:The profound meaning in this saying persuades us that untiring curiosity is the engine which drives both our study and future career.

译:这句话的深刻含义告诉我们,无穷的好奇心是驱动我们学习和未来事业的引擎。


功能句3

例:Firstly, curiosity towards knowledge, without doubt, is the stepping stone which enriches learners’ mind, enhances their learning efficiency, ensures more fruitful results and enables them to go further on the way of education.

译:首先,求知欲无疑是一块垫脚石,它丰富着学习者的头脑,提高他们的求知效率,确保更加丰硕的成果,并使他们能够在教育的路上走得更远。


功能句4

例:Meanwhile, one’s career can be compared to building his or her own skyscraper. If talent constructs the base of the skyscrapers, passionate curiosity makes the building taller and firmer.

译: 同时,一个人的事业可以被比作建造自己的摩天大楼。如果才能构成了摩天大楼的地基,那么强烈的好奇心会使这栋楼变得更高、更坚固。

  • Meanwhile / furthermore / besides / in addition / what’s more
  • Construct / constitute / form / make up / is
  • base / basis / foundation

用1:Meanwhile, friendship can be compared to building a skyscraper and mutual respect makes the building taller and firmer.

用2:_Meanwhile, learning can be compared to building a skyscraper. If motivation constructs the base of the skyscrapers, methods in learning makes the building taller and firmer. _


功能句5

例:To be specific, without curiosity, a new employee is prone to confine himself to low efficiency, poor abilities, and narrow-mindedness.

译:具体而言,没有好奇心,一名新员工容易将自己局限于效率低下,能力差且思维狭隘的境地。

  • 环保主题 -> with plastic bags / poor environmental awareness, an individual
  • 学习主题 -> without good methods, a student
  • 职场主题 -> without team spirit, an employee

功能句6

例:In conclusion, curiosity lays a solid foundation for students' academic success, as well as for them to be qualified competitors in the future.

译:总之,好奇心为学生的学业成功奠定坚实的基础,也为他们将来成为有能力的竞争者奠定坚实的基础。

  • In conclusion / in sum / in a nutshell
  • Foundation / basis

功能句7

例:Only when the young acquire curiosity can they gain life-long benefits from education and work.

译:只有当年轻人拥有好奇心,他们才能从教育和工作中终身受益。


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